To stay in a body and stay porous,
To maintain devout involvement
with the shattering senses.
To salvage in a moment
some rescue for the next,
when this––attendant?
riddled with punctures
and verging brittle
is needing renewal
again.
Here Is
A next attempt.
What a fascinating creature!
Endlessly! : )
From one atom to the next you will salvage your soul! You are the phoenix
What awesome encouragement, Alex. Thank you. I should probably print this one out as a reminder to keep at my desk : )
I just can’t get enough of your writing! It is remarkably deep and complex!
Intricate poetry. Well done!
Bartholomew, thank you!